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PostPosted: Wednesday, October 05th, 2016 - 16:44:22 
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I'm liking this. :) But I am curious, are Hamton's inner-monologues done in the Wonder Years narrator's voice? ;)

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PostPosted: Wednesday, October 05th, 2016 - 19:01:43 
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No. When I did the narration, I imagined Don Messick himself doing the voice-over. :)

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PostPosted: Wednesday, November 02nd, 2016 - 13:54:59 
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Fifi won't be in the next chapter. Not sure, though.

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PostPosted: Saturday, November 26th, 2016 - 08:33:28 
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I'll do the new chapter this weekend.

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PostPosted: Wednesday, December 21st, 2016 - 12:20:45 
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Chapter 4: Nighttime is the Right Time for Food and Romance


The sun was down and the moon was up in Acme Acres. My family and I sat down for dinner in the dining room. And this may surprise you, but there's no pork-related products! But there was still plenty to eat. It's like living with the Klump family. We discussed my day at school.


Winnie: So, how was your day at school, dear?

Wade: Yeah, give us the skinny.


Dad looked around and noticed that we weren't.


Wade: Never mind.

Hamton: I think it's safe to assume that I'm the most popular kid in school.

Winnie: Really?

Wade: That's my boy!

Hamton: Because of my date with Fifi.

Wade: How 'bout that?

Winnie: We're very proud of you, Hamton, but when do we get to meet this Fifi girl?

Wade: Yeah, you always go on about her, but you never described her.

Hamton: Well...


It was time. I couldn't back down.


Hamton: She's purple, she's furry, she speaks French, and she's friendly.

Winnie: She sounds wonderful!

Wade: I'll say. I can't wait to meet the little lady.


What could I do? I couldn't tell them that she was a S-K-U-N-K. I thought it was best if they found that out for themselves.


Hamton: Don't worry, you'll get to, dad. I invited her here for dinner Friday, if that's okay.

Wade: It's more than okay, son.

Winnie: Yeah, we waited so long to meet her. We can't wait for the opportunity!

Hamton: Oh, she's something else, mom.

Wade: From the way you described her, she sounds like an angel.

Hamton: She is to me.


As we carried on with dinner, I told my folks about the rest of my day and I wondered what Fifi was doing. Possibly writing about stuff in her diary.

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Fifi is seen in her beat-up Cadillac, writing.


Fifi: Dear, Le Diary:


Today was, how you say, "grand"! Hammy and moi are ze talk of ze school! I overheard people saying nice things and unfortunately, le bad things as well. But that eez not all! Mah dear, sweet, porkchop has finally invited me over to heez house to meet le porker parents. I am most excited. It is, how you say, "high time" that I have met them. I can only imagine how wonderful they are. And if they are, I can easily see where Hammy gets his charm and personality.


She closed her diary, turned off the light and went to sleep, sighing happily.


Fifi: Le siggghhhh.

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PostPosted: Wednesday, January 11th, 2017 - 12:23:26 
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Chapter 5 will start tonight.

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PostPosted: Tuesday, January 24th, 2017 - 16:07:33 
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Chapter 5: Guess Who's Skunking to Dinner

And so the big night had come. I was in my room dressed in a mint green blazer and pants with a white dress shirt. I was trying to tie my light blue tie and I was sweating profusely. So profusely, my room was flooding.

Hamton: Everything has to go just right tonight,

I said, looking in the mirror.

Hamton: If it doesn't, it's all over.

Winnie: Hamton, is everything okay up there.

Hamton: It's go time! (Takes a huge breath.) Coming, ma!


I went downstairs and my parents, who dressed nice as well, complimented me.

Winnie: Oh, my, don't you look handsome!

Wade: (Chuckles) You look like a million bucks, son!

Hamton: Thanks, guys. So do you.


The doorbell rang. She was here.


Hamton: This is, guys. You're finally gonna meet Fifi.

Winnie: We can hardly wait, dear!

Wade: And don't worry: We'll try to behave.

Winnie: Wade...

Hamton: Oh, dad...

Wade: (Chuckles.) Just kiddin.


Typical father humor. Anyway I opened the door and she looked lovely. She wore that green ensemble which she wore in Born to be Riled. Since I was also wearing green, this worked out fine. She was also carrying a blueberry cheesecake for dessert. It's her mother's recipe.


Fifi: Bonjour, Hammy. I brought le cheesecake. You look tres sharp.

Hamton: So do you. Please come in.


Once she was inside, I made the introduction.


Hamton: Mom, dad, this is Fifi, my girlfriend.

Fifi: Bonjour, Mr. and Mrs. Pig.


They were too speechless to say anything.


Hamton: Aren't ya gonna say hello to her?


Winnie: Hello...dear.

Wade: How do you do?

Fifi: Tres fine. It eez very nice to finally meet you both.

Both: Uhh...same here.

Winnie: Well, shall we all have dinner?


I showed Fifi the dining room, while mom and dad followed us.


Winnie: Well, you have to admit: she's polite and kind of cute...for a skunk.

Wade: I hope she doesn't stink up the house plants.

Winnie: Shh. (Whispering.) She might hear you!


We all eventually had dinner and there was a semi-nice conversation.


Winnie: So...Fifi, Hamton told us he asked you to the Prom.

Fifi: Oui, Madam Pig. He asked me after no one else would.

Wade: (Whispering to Winnie.) I can see why.

Winnie: (Whispering.) Wade! (Resuming the conversation.) That's a shame no one else asked you.

Fifi: I'm over eet over.

Hamton: I was proud to have Fifi as my date.

Winnie: How sweet.

Wade: Hamton also said he had such a great time, he decided to ask you out again to the carnival.

Fifi: Oui, Monsieur Pig. We had a tres fun time until le bully of a badger bothered us.

Hamton: But he didn't completely destroy our night.

Winnie: Hamton told us you protected him from that awful badger.

Wade: Yes, you're quite an amazing young lady.

Fifi: Aww, merci.

Hamton: She's very amazing.

Wade: Ya know, son, when you told us about Fifi, you never told us she was well...a skunk.


This comment offended Fifi.


Fifi: (Gasps) Pardon moi.


She ran outside.


Winnie: Oh, Wade.

Wade: What?! I meant that in a good way!

Hamton: I gotta talk to Fifi!


I ran out the front door and she was outside the gate. I caught up to her and she was quite upset.


Hamton: Fifi, you okay?

Fifi: Your father thinks just because I am a skunk, I'm not good enough for you.

Hamton: Hey, that's not true.

Fifi: Your family doesn't like me or any other kind of skunk. I knew this whole thing was a meestake.

Hamton: Listen, my family really likes you and they have nothing against skunks. Honestly. They're really great people once you get to know 'em. What do ya say, Fifi? Wanna go back in and give it another try?

Fifi: Oui.


I took her hand and we both went back in the house.


Winnie: I'm so glad you came back, Fifi.

Wade: Yeah, I'm so sorry for my rudeness.

Fifi: Don't give it a second thought, Monsieur Pig.

Wade: If you're good enough for Hamton, you're good enough for us.

Fifi: I am so glad to hear that.

Hamton: Why don't we all have Fifi's blueberry cheesecake she made herself?

Winnie: Sounds good to me.

Wade: Let's dig in!


So in the end, we all had the cheesecake and good times were had by all. Well, that's my story. For all you guys out there, I hope you don't have a hectic time introducing your girl to the folks.

The end.

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PostPosted: Sunday, January 29th, 2017 - 14:44:29 
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What a nice ending. :)

Lovely work!


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PostPosted: Tuesday, January 31st, 2017 - 09:41:50 
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Thanks.

I try my best.

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PostPosted: Monday, April 17th, 2017 - 09:10:32 
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That was a pretty good story. It's nice to see someone respect Hamton and Fifi's relationship, and seeing Hamton's parents again was a real treat. If only more fanfic writers could be as intelligent as you.


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PostPosted: Monday, April 17th, 2017 - 16:44:25 
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Glad you like it.

The first rule about doing a Hamton/Fifi story is putting your heart and soul into making it. :)

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PostPosted: Monday, April 17th, 2017 - 17:35:59 
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You're welcome! Also, I agree about putting your heart and soul into it. If you're just shipping them for the heck of it or make Hamton a villain, it won't work. You have to care for the pairing, and you have to give them good chemistry.


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